WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a character's physical appearance through the eyes of someone who feels intense jealousy for them.

How accurate would the description be when tainted by strong emotion?

Looks Of Envy

I stare intensely from across the room while she giggles and laughs with her friends without a care in the world. Why does she get to have it all?

Long luscious curly hair.

Deep hazel eyes that can distract you with one look.

A tall and slightly curvy build that can entice any male in a 5m radius.

Friends that will bow. Down to. Her every need and order.

It’s not fair.

She probably woke up ridiculously early to look put together. Used lot of hair products and curler to make it look good so technicallly she’s fake.

Shes a liar.

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