WRITING OBSTACLE

Demonstrate. Incapacitate. Solidify.

In a story of no more than 10 sentences, use these three words in any order. The point is to create a story line that allows you to link them all naturally, without forcing them into random places.

The Worst Merry Christmas Ever

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One day little Jonny and Ellie are fighting over a red marker to color a Christmas coloring book. They were both screaming, pushing, and pulling each other. Until their mother came out of her room and told both of them to stop yelling at each other. A couple hours later they were decorating the Christmas tree, little Jonny likes to demonstrate how to put the ornaments on the tree.

Ellie was so tired of her little brother trying to show her how to do things so she decided to rip the ornament out of little Jonny’s hand. Which caused the ornament to shatter on the wood flouring. Their mother was incapacitated she was furious. She told them that their great grandmother made that when she was a little girl. Little Jonny and Ellie were disappointed.

On only five days till Christmas Little Jonny and his mom were wrapping presents in the living room. While Ellie and here dad were making the food. After they were done with wrapping presents and making food little Jonny and Ellie’s mother decided to show them the true meaning of Christmas by showing them poor families on the TV.

Little Jonny and Ellie got pretty sad and felt bad after what all the have done. But after a couple of days Ellie was still being mean to her little brother. Little Jonny tried to explain how they were both very lucky kids, but she did not care. She kept on pushing, bullying, and screaming at little Jonny. Then on Christmas Eve, Ellie pushed little Jonny off of the staircase on the solidify wood floor. Little Jonny cried for help.

When their mother saw she was unspeakable. They rushed little Jonny to the ER. When they got there Ellie was really terrified about little Jonny, saying she was so sorry and it would never happen ever again. But little Jonny knew that she was lying. When the doctor came in the room he diagnosed little Johnny with being paralyzed from the waist down. That news was awful for their mother, father, Ellie, and little Jonny to hear. When Ellie went back to school. The teachers said merry Christmas, but Ellie said this is the worst Merry Christmas ever. Then ever since that one terrifying night Ellie has been thankful for every single day that she has with little Jonny.

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