STORY STARTER
You are stuck in a room with a psychopath who wants to kill you. You have 5 minutes to convince them otherwise.
Write a short speech to convince this desolate individual to spare your life.
STORY STARTER
You are stuck in a room with a psychopath who wants to kill you. You have 5 minutes to convince them otherwise.
Write a short speech to convince this desolate individual to spare your life.
I really liked the story and how you kept us hanging, not knowing what was happening. Me being young I didn't like the curse words, but I just ignored that.
I just read your writings, RT Bowen, and I have to admit this is my favourite. You do a great job at capturing the reader’s attention here and keep us hooked to find out whether or not the protagonist survives. I think your dialogue is as really smart here too. You resolved the issue through dialogue alone in quite a believable way.
I didn’t line the simile about the 5K. Part of it was simply the abbreviations and partly it simply felt a little off.
Some of your other pieces read a bit like a diary entry rather than having a detailed plot of some kind. Your pieces were generally very descriptive and well executed, but perhaps just consider the plot a little as you write: what problem is unravelling? How can I reveal this to the reader?
Keep it up, though! I look forward to seeing more of your writing :)