WRITING OBSTACLE
Create a paragraph conjuring the intensity of love at first sight.
Use descriptive language like hyperbole and metaphors to convey the connection, and awe of this moment (whether or not you believe in such events)!
My Love
It was a zap. A zing. An instant connection between two people and for once, I believed in Molly’s so-called “movie moments”.
His eyes were intense, looking not only at me but my soul, my entire being. I felt as if I was on fire but my hands were cold and clammy. I didnt even notice anything else about him, couldnt tell yoy his hair colour or the clothes he was wearing but in this moment i could see the rest of our lives. A small lakeside house in Cornwall, the dog ive always dreamed of with her pink collar and floppy ears. We wouldnt have any kids.
Love. I felt like i was flying, soaring above the skies like a bird on a high with no care in the world. I couldnt wait to meet him.
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