WRITING OBSTACLE
Your characters are caught in a sudden thunderstorm in a forest.
Write a description of this experience, involving the senses as much as possible. Would your characters enjoy, detest or fear this scenario?
“Slave Maker” Thunderstorm
“This is going worse” said Yuuto. After a couple hours chasing down the wild boar, he found himself facing a thunderstorm, right in this rainforest. This is a dangerous, or truth is, desparate situation for him. However, he didn’t lose his hope just yet. As quick as possible, he started digging the ground, trying to make a small tunnel to hide inside. Luckily, because of the rain before, the soil became softer and it’s really a good thing for him. After around 15 minutes, he finally digged out a small bunker and get right inside. The pitch dark surrounds him there, and Yuuto has no choice but to sit down and patiently wait for the storm to end.
“This going to last forever…” he said. But soon, the roar of the natural started to lower. Can’t help his excited, Yuuto got out of the bunker, and the first thing he saw was a tribe dancing around his bunker. As soon as they saw him, they got caught off guard, and just wait for that, he ran out of the place by all of his strength left. They quickly chased him down, and due to his tiredness, he then got caught by those he thought “dangerous”. They picked him up, went back to their spot and tied him to a tree while others still celebrating. Right at the moment when he didn’t feel anything else but hopeless, the tribe finally ended their party and turned to him with desire gazes. Only until this point, he could see their faces, clear as day. Most of them are women, when the slaves are all men. That gave him some hope, as they might keep him as a slave, and it really happened. After suffering a thunderstorm, Yuuto now are under a stranger’s skirt, and depsite craving for freedom, he still has to play this humiliated role for a while, until an unexpected thing happened.