Beautiful sunset
With rays of heat
Thankful we met
Chance meet and greet
Time is fleeting
Where do the seconds go
Pondering on our meeting
Happiness we know
Then comes the end
At last as we know it
No longer can mend
Trying not to show it
No waking tomorrow
This day is now done
No time for sorrow
In this life, I won
Tessa🦋
Your poem is a beautiful and poignant expression of a sunset and an ephemeral romance. You have used simple and expressive words to create a vibrant image and transmit a range of emotions. You have also used rhyme and rhythm effectively to create a musical flow and a sense of harmony in your poem. Your poem ends with a strong and memorable sentence that captures your poem's theme. I think you did a good job on that poem. Well done! ✊🏽
