WRITING OBSTACLE

In a world where people don't have all their senses until they turn 18, your protagonist wakes up on their birthday to a whole new experience.

What will the protagonist feel for the first time? How can you describe this sense as if it's never been experienced before?

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They said this would happen but it just felt too surreal. Lights, colours, shapes surround me as I open my eyes to the world for the first time. The overwhelming feeling that fills my heart causes me to tear up. I wipe at them furiously for fear that will take the magic of today. My room was totally different to what I had imagined. Everything was. I leap out of bed and rush to the mirror, no longer worrying about tripping over one of my fallen pillows. I freeze as I stare at my reflection. My eyes were wide with wonder and elation: I can see it in the sparkle of my very dark brown eyes. I touch the surface of the mirror and watch as my reflection does the same. Amazing.
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