WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a scene between two characters who have suppressed their feelings for each other.

What features of dialogue or behaviour could you highlight in this kind of relationship?

Afraid

And all of a sudden the feelings that I had pushed down for so long were surfacing

Becoming a bubbling volcano of things I couldn’t express

It was joy

It was fear

It was sadness

There were tears


Afraid of what you’d say

Afraid of what you’d see

Afraid to think that you would never want me


Cause why me?

A girl so battered and torn

Why me?


But as the volcano of emotions exploded

You stood there

Like a calm in the storm

Like a warm bed for weary heads


And that’s when I realized it was all okay


No matter what

You would stay

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