High above the city
I see all that happens
All the small children
Running and leaping
High above the city
I see all those that come
So many new faces
Smiling so great
High above the city
I sit all alone
Thinking ‘is this all there is’
High above the city
I’d recommend working on two things:
1)Word choice and 2)your persona.
Storytellers can have multiple personas, but poets usually use one. I have a blockage with my own culture, which leaves me sunk when it comes to reaching my persona.
To start making your persona, think about where you grew up, what time period, and who you are. I can’t promise more readers, but the quality of your basic writing should increase.
