I really love this poem, the description is perfect! You succeeded in catching my attention from the very first entry-hiding the glowing hands. I loved how you explain more and more over the course of the diary entry. You revealed just enough to avoid losing interest but just a little to keep us reading.
And I almost forgot, you entries seemed so real. Like the main character was an actual person in fascination of their power, getting caught and for who was coming after them.
I would love if you made a part two; I want to know what happens next and the whole issue behind the glowing hands. Is it a power, a disease? Was it inherited or a gift? I’d love to know all those stuff! I do love the way you ended it tho, with them coming up and the writer stoping mid sentence. Quite suspenseful!
I wish I could have such descriptive ability as you. Keep up the good work, I love it! 😍