WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a series of letters exchanged between two best friends separated by conflict.

Try to develop your characters as much as possible while using only letter form. What relationship do they have, and how is it altered by conflict?

Pony/Bee

Dear Bee,


Your shoe is untied.


Did you check? Sorry, that was an immature thing I often did in order to get a laugh but you never laughed too so it was never really funny. My nail broke earlier this morning while cleaning and I searched for hours trying to find it.


I don’t know why. It reminds me of my endless searching for you. I don’t know why, but I do.


-


Pony,


I’m glad you’ve reached out but I do not want to talk to you. You must understand this, right? I never much want to talk to anyone. You are no an exception although I wish you were because when I opened this letter there was a stopping of my heart. If I had died then, would you have saved me?


I did check to see if my shoe was untied. I never understood your humor but your laugh was a sound I could hear forever. Let’s not be silly. Shall I call you Andy?


-


Dear Bee,


Please do not call me Andy. It’s a name I haven’t heard in a while now. If you were to call me that, what would I call you? Your name has always been bee. I remember you chose my name because you hated yours. You didn’t want to be the only different one. I like you because you are different.


I would save you. I thought about it for hours and I would save you. I think I need to know, though, would you save me? I am so lost, Bee. I am so lost.


-


Dear Pony,


Your letter sat on my table for weeks before I decided to respond. I don’t want you to be lost but I don’t have a map. I’ve wandered down the wrong path and can’t find my way back to you. Stop writing me, please. It hurts me to talk to you and you know that.


I did what I did because I had to. I didn’t mean for it to cause such misfortune.


-


Dear Bee,


When we were seven, I finally asked you why your name was Bee. Do you remember what you said?


“Everyone hates bees.”


You had to protect yourself. I never was mad at you. I did bad things. I fell into the pit and couldn’t find a way out. I tried climbing up and digging but nothing worked. I had to get comfortable. I was stuck.


-


Dear Pony,


How did it feel? There were times when I was walking by and would nearly slip in but I managed to walk steady. Was it worth it? Do you ever wish you hadn’t done it? This will be the last time I write you, Pony. I didn’t tell you but I’m married now. I have a daughter that I named Andrea. She doesn’t know who you are.


You were my best friend.


-


Dear Bee,


I like to think it was worth it if it had to be between the two of us. I much rather it be me in here instead of you. Also, I’m happy you got married. Andrea is a lovely name, isn’t it? I’m very proud of you, Bee. I get out of here in three years. I no longer count down the days. Time has stopped moving for me and is now moving because of me.


For what it’s worth, you still are my best friend. I hope you end up reading this letter. You don’t have to reply. It’s hard for me to forget you. I don’t plan on doing so anytime soon.


I want to make sure you know that I never hated bees.

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