WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a strong emotion without saying what it is.

You could use metaphors and creative description, or you could focus on what your senses perceive when you are feeling this emotion.

His Face

I thought my life was complete but in this moment it seems it was nothing before he came. My heart feels so full it could burst and tears fill my eyes. I can’t help but sob at the wonder of finally seeing his face. I know in that instant that I would gladly die for him, or kill for him, if he ever needed it. I am shaking all over as the midwife places him on my chest. “You’re here, you’re real!” I tell him. I giggle a little at his slimy, wrinkly expression. I’ve always thought brand new babies were kind of gross and ugly, but he is not. He is the most beautiful thing I have ever laid eyes on.
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