WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a description of a place that you know well, but from the perspective of someone who is seeing it for the first time.
Think about the things you might notice first, and what someone new to this place might not understand on first sighting.
The Perspective
Coca Café, the best coffee shop ever! Their employees always have a good attitude towards costumers who are buying coffee there. It’s full of people which means that they have to make sure they add more space to the building. Outside, I always see many kids playing inside the mini playground. A coffee shop with a nice feeling. I went there one day. An employee served me and gave me a 50% discount. After, I picked up my younger brother, who looked happy. He asked me if we could even stay a bit longer! That’s how great Coca Café is. One day, I made my way to the café. I saw someone staring at the building asking herself if she should go in or not. I told her the Café is perfect for coffee lovers.
Her Perspective
She told me about the new Café and that it was for coffee lovers. I knew I was a coffee lover and told her if she could tour me around since she really knew the Café well. She grabbed my hand and dragged me in. I saw many things happening at the exact same times. For example, a waitress giving a mug full of coffee to a costumer or people near each other chatting with joy. “It’s a very cheerful place in here. They even have a mini playground outside for adults to drop of their kids!” She explained cheerfully.
“I’m 18, why would I have a kid with me? And, what’s your name? I never got it..”
“Naomi Dome. What’s yours?” She asked me curiously.
“Angelica Rose. I’m a fan of coffee, it makes me calm. That’s all.” Naomi smiled at me and encouraged me to go buy a coffee of theirs. As I walked to the table in front of me, I heard a woman whispering about me saying I’m weird. I got sweaty, and the cashier asked me what I would like to order. I looked up at the menu to see what they were selling. There were many options. Some things weren’t even coffees. I finally saw something intriguing that caught my eye, so I decided to order that. “Marshmallow Whip please! By the way, I’m Angelica Rose, I’m pretty new here.”
“Since your new, I’ll tell the person serving you to give you it free Angelica!” The cashier looked at me and complimented my style and looks. I tiptoed to Naomi and whispered with excitement in her ear. “My first time here and it’s already amazing! I get the Marshmallow Whip free!”
“Ooh! Good choice! I ordered that once, it’s fantastic! Even though they added something wrong, it made it even more delicious!” I danced when I heard this. I went back to the table, and they gave me my order and gave me some change. I drank it the first I got it. It tasted like a good dream that was even better than a good dream! I started to have more than usual and soon, I got full. “I’m so full Naomi! Uh, let’s go now, I’ll see you tomorrow at the store. Just wait outside for me if you get there before me. I’ll do the same!” And with that, I left the Café. Naomi waved at me smiling, and I did the same.
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