This is going to be fun. I’m being sarcastic. I hate the cold. I get very cold very easily and one time I got frostbite when I was skiing and I was 11 years old. I hate this. I’m going to die out here in the freezing cold.
Hi, this is an excellent short story!
Just saying, perhaps you should describe the cold a little more?
Example; I feel my breath coming away in a foggy wisps, snowflakes falling all around me. Soon there would be the driving rains delivered by greying winter storm clouds, and harsh wind that made my teeth chatter and made me shiver to the bone.
It might make it longer/more descriptive!
Keep up the good writing.
EtherealButterflyGirl ❤️❤️☺️☺️