WRITING OBSTACLE
From the perspective of a character who is afraid of water, write a detailed description of the moments before they dive into the sea.
Seaside Troubles
Standing on the beach of safety, the water almost seems to lash out in irritation, urging me either forward or backward. I step away. The sand squishes below my feet, it’s soft texture comforting me. I breathe in the salty air, and it burns my nose. I filter out the voices and movements of other beach-goers, their laughing and yelling lost in the thick, heavy worry of my mind. Trembling slightly, I reach one foot out to touch the water’s surface. It’s shocking cold makes me audibly gasp, and I have to reassure myself I can do this.
I can do this. I can do this. I can do thi-nope, I stared too long at the water. It roars menacingly back at me. Oh, WHY did I make a bet with my friends? I can’t swim! I’ll drown!
I do need the money though. Twenty whole dollars! You can do this, Aria, just step-one foot, then the other.
As much as I try, I can’t will myself to move. It’s as if some invisible barrier is between me and the sea. Maybe my friends’ tactic was the correct one- I just have to jump in.
Well, THATS terrifying.
Okay, one, two, three-
God, this water is COLD!
(Didn’t have much time but wanted to grow my streak, I might edit this later).