STORY STARTER

You are camping with your family in an unfamiliar forest. You wake in the middle of the night to find yourself alone in your tent.

Practice throwing your reader straight into the drama of the story - begin your narrative with suspense, confusion, and tension from the offset.

Campout Catastrophe

I had drifted to sleep in our tent when some of us were still sitting around the fire. It was like someone had drugged me, because I was out for a long time. I woke with a start only to discover I was all alone.

My husband was gone, but his backpack wasn’t.

There was also no trace of my two sons, but their stuff had also been left behind. I tried not to jump to conclusions or panic. I grabbed my phone and called my husband, but it went straight to voicemail. I left a message and hung up. Now we had a problem.

I searched the perimeter of our campsite. About fifty yards I saw the camper. It was a strange site, there in the thicket, no doubt stuck. I investigated and found that the camper was not just stuck; it had been stripped of its parts. I gasped.

I walked a little further and saw what were freshly dug holes or graves, I presumed. I kept my mouth from screaming and pressed on.

Then I saw my husband. He did not see me. I kept hidden so I could spy on him. He was holding a rifle on two miscreants who were also holding rifles. No.

I kept watching. My husband appeared to be negotiating with the creeps who had our children!

I saw them struggling to get free and my husband motioning the kidnappers to untie them.

Well, I decided to intervene. I reached for my gun holster and cocked my revolver. I shot at one of the crook’s feet. He cussed as he crumbled to the ground in pain. One of my boys had untied his hand and was untying his brother.

I rushed in. I hugged my boys then threw my arms around my husband, weeping for joy. The other criminal had fled.

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