STORY STARTER
Write a few entries of a captain’s log that is found washed up on the shore.
What kind of story can you reveal through this form of narrative?
STORY STARTER
Write a few entries of a captain’s log that is found washed up on the shore.
What kind of story can you reveal through this form of narrative?
Uh-oh, I thing Captain Hunter Hobson is a grumpy captain!!! (Great name by the way!😃)
Ahhhhh, and there is the lovely addition of Steampunkishness!: “The first rule of aeronautics: Anticipate the worst.”
Love this!: “If the men want to suck their thumbs and wish each other sweet dreams at night’s end, who am I to comment.”
😂”…or the high altitude forcing their minds to fuzz—“ Wonderful image!
Ahhh, a little mythspeak sneaking in: Skyport Notus 👍
Nice touch: “(I have attached a daguerreotype of the scene).”
Naughty Fox and Dottie!
Nice rhythm here: “My solve in the matter has resulted in a cut in their rations and a lash for each.”👏
Again great combination of image and language!: “Barlow came rushing to my cabin, a bloodied gash in his side and the words of murder on his lips.”🙌🏼
Oh my!: “His body now rests in the tub, submerged in the last of my rum.” Ooooo, rum corpse and full chamber pot!🤢🤢🤢!
Nice image again, simple but strong!: “Frost has claimed the cabin windows.”
Great shift from the story—I was hanging there in the air with the captain and you quickly ‘grounded’ me again!👏
AH! Thank you for the lovely surprise at the end of Grandpa Fox and Grandma Dottie!!! Such a wonderful story to read on such a sunny Sunday morning!
I have just discovered there are no Zeppelins to give a B Rosser rating! So, I’ll just have to give you five Notuses surrounded with stars!
⭐️🌬🌬🌬🌬🌬⭐️