STORY STARTER
Write a horror story that takes place at a birthday party.
Help the co-founder of Daily Prompt celebrate his birthday today, by writing in his favourite genre!
STORY STARTER
Write a horror story that takes place at a birthday party.
Help the co-founder of Daily Prompt celebrate his birthday today, by writing in his favourite genre!
This is a good, concise, short story😀
It was quite difficult to read though because you kept changing tenses.
“It WAS a cold evening” “WAS munching” “they WENT“ are past tense, but “Hannah HAS”, “she follows” “he locks” are all present tense.
Either are fine for a story, but it doesn’t make sense to mix them!
Keep up the good writing.
Couple of pointers from me. Never start a story with the weather. It adds little to it and just uses up words. You could also look to write in a more active tone rather than passively telling the reader what is happening. Describe the sounds and sights, describe the taste of the skittles rather just telling me she is eating skittles.
I love your descriptions 🖤