POEM STARTER
Write a poem that includes the motif of masks.
A motif is a repeated but varying detail which highlights the poems theme, similar to a symbol.
POEM STARTER
Write a poem that includes the motif of masks.
A motif is a repeated but varying detail which highlights the poems theme, similar to a symbol.
You’ve gone so far with pantoums!!!
The idea was really original and fascinating, very visual! The narrator seemed fairly nutural, not an observer or someone very invested, just a narrator which seen as it was so emotive worked really well. The pace dragged a bit but that might just be because it was quite wordy, however it’s so visual and descriptive I don’t think it matters, you have to properly read it but when you do it’s worth it.
This is so powerful!! I love to though on perspective!