WRITING OBSTACLE
Crackle. Pond. Night.
Write a description of a person or creature inspired by these three words. You may be as fantastical or realistic as you like. The words may inspire the description, or be used within it.
WRITING OBSTACLE
Crackle. Pond. Night.
Write a description of a person or creature inspired by these three words. You may be as fantastical or realistic as you like. The words may inspire the description, or be used within it.
This was a lot of fun to read! Strong work on imagery and personality. Somehow, the mention of “knock[ing] the smug grin off Tiffany’s face” really gave me a sense for the protagonist. And “like melting chocolate over caramel” - so so good! My only feedback is to watch out for tense switching. “I know…” “The setting sun seemed…” “I’m barely a hunter…” minor, but I hope this helps! Thanks for writing!