STORY STARTER

The first sentence of your story starts with ‘Birds circled overhead’.

Think about how the type of birds you choose can symbolise the themes of the story.

Their senseless programmed circles

Birds circled overhead

They circled with a false sense of freedom

Obtaining the power to go where they chose, yet mindlessly flying in circles

Over and over and over again, almost in a programmed or practiced motion


Perhaps they enjoy the sense of community

With their senseless flight of motion

Maybe they even feel fulfilled with this repetive routine

Don't they know there's a whole sky?


As I watch from afar, I almost feel angry

Why? When there's a whole sky

Circles over and over again, all while there's a whole sky

Senseless practiced and programmed motions


They fly around and around again

All while there's a whole sky

All while obtaining a freedom I can only read of

The whole sky was made for them, yet they stay in their circles


Their senseless programmed circles

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