WRITING OBSTACLE
You are going to do a bungee jump for the first time. Describe the experience.
Consider your character's emotions, the sensations they will be experiencing, and their motivation behind attempting the jump.
10 Steps Away
10 Steps Away
I’m steps away from voluntarily jumping off a bridge. Why am I doing this? How did I let my friends talk me into this. This is exactly what I was warned about all through my childhood.
9 Steps Away
Is this even safe? I didn’t see any kind of permits or anything, but these guys look like they know what they’re doing. Right? Hey, if I do this and am panicked when I’m pulled back up the worker will have to wrap me in his arms and comfort me.
8 Steps Away
What is wrong with me. I’m not that desperate and alone that I would jump off a bridge just to get a guys attention! What if I am the one? Not the good kind of one, but the one that pushes the bungee past it’s limit, and instead of yo-yo-ing around for a few seconds I just yo. That’s what I would be remembered by, a terrible last decision.
6 Steps
What will I be remembered by, it’s not like I’ve accomplished anything significant in my 30 years. I’ve worked and done what I was supposed to, how horrible is that.
4 Steps Away
That’s it do or die, this is who I am now. I’m not going to let fear keep me from trying this. If I die, hopefully I look cool on the way down.
3 Steps Away
This is a mistake. This is a mistake. This is a mistake.
2 Steps Away
The hot instructor is talking to me but I have no clue what he’s saying. It’s just a blur of sounds. Is he singing to me? I nod yes with an awkward giggle and it seems to do the trick.
1 Step
Tell my parents I loved them, and it was me that scratched the car in 2005. Turns out a stairway of paint cans do not make for a good dunk launchpad.
0 Steps
Ahhh! I’ve changed from a woman to a stick man, unable to move. Unable to breathe. Not wanting to see.
Until I’m no longer bouncing. I’m gliding, practically flying. I’m floating over lush trees, a sparkling blue stream, and letting the cool breeze push through my hair. It’s a view that I couldn’t see from 10 steps away, and definitely didn’t appreciate from 1. I’m glad this was not a mistake.