WRITING OBSTACLE

Create a paragraph conjuring the intensity of love at first sight.

Use descriptive language like hyperbole and metaphors to convey the connection, and awe of this moment (whether or not you believe in such events)!

First

Does it count as love at first sight if all of a sudden you saw them differently?

If the warmth of this moment melted your layers to reveal something new to me then surely it is a first. I would not claim to be able to see a lake that was buried beneath my sight with frost and snow. Just as I wouldn’t claim to be oblivious to these melted waters before me now that I so achingly want to plunge beneath. Just to have dipped my gaze against your lapping shore has undone me, and for the first time I feel as though I must live to memorize someone’s depths. I’d stay living beneath your surface should you ever decide to freeze over again, but with the warmth that envelopes us now I worry little of that…

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