WRITING OBSTACLE

Your character has been kidnaped by a pirate and trapped in a dark dungeon below deck…

How can they use their other senses to determine where their abductor is taking them?

Below Deck

The wooden planks goraned beneath Kat’s back as the ship tilted. She couldn’t **see**, but she felt the damp, splintered boards pressing into her skin.

The air reeked of salt and tar, thick and cloying. She strained her ears—boots** thudded above**, heavy and deliberate. The creak of a swinging latern matched the ship’s slow, rhythmic sway.

A faint, sharp clanging echoed from somewhere—chains? No. Anchor chains**.** They were nearing shore.

She tasted iron on her split lip. Blood.

Then, through the planks, she felt it—distant tremors, uneven and heavy. Docking pylons**.**

Her heart pounded. Land waas near**.** Her chance.

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