WRITING OBSTACLE

Your protagonist receives life-changing news but can't verbally react.

Convey the emotional impact solely through the character's actions, expressions, and body language.

I’m sorry to tell you…

Show nothing

Don’t flinch

Don’t blink

Face blank

But not set to stone

No intake of breath

No outtake as spent as a sigh

Or “Oh” more breath than sound spoken long as a clerical dirge

Definitely do not let the scream escape

Stay upright

Spine straight

Do not pool into the floor

A cascade of tears

It’s not real

Can’t be real

I deny this

I refuse this

It is not real

Frame broken

Still the house stands

For all the world a pleasant country cottage

Not the “homey” and yet generic family room of a sterile hospital

Holding echoes of lives undone

(Does not follow the Prompt as it contains internal dialogue. Also, last stanza is metaphor- not description. And yet, it is a start.)

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