WRITING OBSTACLE
Your protagonist receives life-changing news but can't verbally react.
Convey the emotional impact solely through the character's actions, expressions, and body language.
I’m sorry to tell you…
Show nothing
Don’t flinch
Don’t blink
Face blank
But not set to stone
No intake of breath
No outtake as spent as a sigh
Or “Oh” more breath than sound spoken long as a clerical dirge
Definitely do not let the scream escape
Stay upright
Spine straight
Do not pool into the floor
A cascade of tears
It’s not real
Can’t be real
I deny this
I refuse this
It is not real
Frame broken
Still the house stands
For all the world a pleasant country cottage
Not the “homey” and yet generic family room of a sterile hospital
Holding echoes of lives undone
(Does not follow the Prompt as it contains internal dialogue. Also, last stanza is metaphor- not description. And yet, it is a start.)