not my best work‼️
metal against metal,
she sought to distract me with her tongue;
spewing words that were meant to cloud my mind.
but her wits were no match to my blade.
metal against skin.
watching her crumple to the floor.
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metal against metal,
she sought to distract me with her tongue;
spewing words that were meant to cloud my mind.
but her wits were no match to my blade.
metal against skin.
watching her crumple to the floor.
While it’s “not your best work” (because it’s actually really good), it’s a very interesting poem. I mean that in no way is it bad. It is short, yes, but I love how you wrote it. 🌸
