I liked this a lot. I feel that you were able to effectively illustrate your scenes without needing too many words.
The phrase “soft whisper murmured” is a little redundant. Whispers are always soft, and a murmur is just a kind of whisper. I think simply saying “murmured” will work better here.
It feels a little weird that there is a missing entry for Friday. I think it would be good for there to be an entry for Friday as well, because it might work better if there were three steps leading up to “I heard the language of silence” line.
I hope my feedback will be useful to you!