WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a character's physical appearance through the eyes of someone who feels intense jealousy for them.

How accurate would the description be when tainted by strong emotion?

Her Perfect Blue Eyes

Of course I see her when I go to the beach. With her perfect blue eyes, the color of the ocean. Her beautiful round lips. Her smile that matches the light of the sun, and her long perfect hair that flows around her as if the wind is dancing for her. The way she walks with such elegance and it seems as if the water is parting for her when she enters the ocean. I feel as if I could gaze upon her forever, as I keep wondering how she looks so perfect compared to everyone else. She is so memorable yet everytime I see her again I forget just how perfect she is. I wish I could just see how it feels to be so perfectly beautiful, even if just for a minute, I’d like to be her for just a minute.

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