POEM STARTER
Belonging
Write a poem about what 'Belonging' means to you.
POEM STARTER
Belonging
Write a poem about what 'Belonging' means to you.
I feel that your prose expresses well the anomaly of true love between somewhat opposite individuals. I like the balance you achieved by turning around at the halfway point and changing your perspective. The point you made was that what connects us is more important than what separates us. We are all stuck here in our various forms, having superficialities keep us away from this who might otherwise be friends, lovers, husbands or wives. “But still your hand fits perfectly in mine” is a key turning point and is my favourite line. Thanks!