STORY STARTER
For a while your brother was convinced that someone was following him; now he has gone missing.
Continue the story...
STORY STARTER
For a while your brother was convinced that someone was following him; now he has gone missing.
Continue the story...
This is really good! I still have shivers tingling my spine!
One thing that I’m slowly learning is to back to the beginning of what I wrote and see if I can remove anything. Often the first sentences are there to tell me what the story is about, but not for the reader. So what do you think about removing the first paragraph entirely and starting with second? For me that’s the true start to the story.
👏🙌🏼The dialog was good and you have a talent for describing! Keep up the good work!😀