WRITING OBSTACLE

You are a child who has lost their favourite toy on a day out, and bedtime is quickly approaching. Describe how this makes you feel.

Consider your language choice carefully here, and the age of the child. How do they display their emotions?

I Lost Mrs. Moo

The sun is going down

Yet, I cannot sleep.

I’m wearing my nighttime gown

Yet I keep going “Meep!”

“Meep! Meep!”

I cry, and whine.

Yet, I cannot sleep.



Earlier today I went to the zoo.

I think that’s how I lost Mrs. Moo.

Because, earlier on that sad, sad, day

I ran, in hopes that the ticket to Disneyland wouldn’t delay.

Of course

Running had nothing to do with Disneyland.

But I guess I just thought.

Thought that it would work.

But nothing did.

My day turned out mid.

Because Mrs. Moo was gone

And I could not sleep.

So, boom!

My day was ruined.

But I cannot think.

Think what to do

About Mrs Moo.

Because she’s still gone

And I don’t think I can fall asleep until long.

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