STORY STARTER

Submitted by Lana Rose

Time keeps randomly stopping around you, and you think it is you who is doing it. Then one night you are at a party, and time stops. Everyone is frozen, except one person at the other end of the room...

Revive Me

Frozen time feels like a heartbeat

Quickly the time passes

A beat, or two

You can never really tell

Sometimes I hear three beats

Others I hear none

Until one day, a rhythm appeared.


Not the normal crotchet rhythm

This new, different

A crotchet

A quaver

A semiquaver

A demisemiquaver


The drum gets faster

The heartbeat speeds up

My lungs grasp onto passing breath

Like a kid in a candy shop


I want more air

I NEED more air

Until I don’t.


My lungs are no longer grasping for air

I feel revived

Or I would, if I was alive.

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