WRITING OBSTACLE
Inspired by Amber A
Use the metaphor of a fuse being lit and its impending explosion to represent a mental eruption of a strong emotion.
Consider how you will develop this metaphor with strong visual and emotional representation.
A Child Is A Candle Is A Bomb
There’s a wick in my head
My father lit it
Mother lets it burn
I cannot snuff the glow
So I scent the wax
And decorate the jar
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My brain is on fire
My parents are gone
It burns me to ash
Maybe now a flower can grow
In my empty skull
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My brain is on FIRE
I try to choke it and burn myself
Skin singed all away
Burned empty again
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I feel lighter fluid
Gushing from my eyes
I’ll be damp for a little while
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1
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Override the fire
Explode what’s left
Let my small candle wick
Lie on the ground
Mushroomed and useless
Far from the mess I’ve made