WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a scene where a character starts off with a firm feeling about something but, through interaction with another character, begins to question it.

Focus on the subtle shift in the character's perspective.

Fall Weathers Wring Spring Feathers

Do you see it too? Oh yes I do! And you understand the constant- The craving- The willing- The aching- But never we pray? It’s just as you say! And maybe I don’t like the way I am But I like the you that I ran- Straight, straight into Lillie! Millie? No! Not that- LILLIE! “She said clearly, Loud and clear, Straight through my ear, Right as I peer” We hang out And joke around Playing about And laughing quite loud She laughs quite loud I smile and turn She made a joke I laugh, crash, and burn. But she made a joke And I made a joke And she made a joke.. And I- I wake up and see a light But it burns It’s bright like the sun But it hurts And she made me better And I helped her weather But but but.. Oh so oh so many lots of- Lot to say, and lots to say love I was pulled and pulled She pulled and pulled I ached and ached She.. Ached and ached But nobody told me Today was the day to rake Up the leaves
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