WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a scene where a character starts off with a firm feeling about something but, through interaction with another character, begins to question it.

Focus on the subtle shift in the character's perspective.

Fall Weathers Wring Spring Feathers

Do you see it too?


Oh yes I do!

And you understand the constant-


The craving-


The willing-


The aching-


But never we pray?


It’s just as you say!

And maybe I don’t like the way I am

But I like the you

that I ran-

Straight, straight into


Lillie!


Millie?


No! Not that- LILLIE!


“She said clearly,

Loud and clear,

Straight through my ear,

Right as I peer”


We hang out

And joke around

Playing about

And laughing quite loud


She laughs quite loud

I smile and turn

She made a joke

I laugh, crash, and burn.

But she made a joke

And I made a joke

And she made a joke..

And I-


I wake up and see a light

But it burns

It’s bright like the sun

But it hurts

And she made me better

And I helped her weather


But but but..


Oh so oh so many lots of-

Lot to say, and lots to say love


I was pulled and pulled

She pulled and pulled


I ached and ached


She..

Ached and ached


But nobody told me


Today was the day to rake


Up the leaves

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