WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a scene where a character starts off with a firm feeling about something but, through interaction with another character, begins to question it.
Focus on the subtle shift in the character's perspective.
Fall Weathers Wring Spring Feathers
Do you see it too?
Oh yes I do!
And you understand the constant-
The craving-
The willing-
The aching-
But never we pray?
It’s just as you say!
And maybe I don’t like the way I am
But I like the you
that I ran-
Straight, straight into
Lillie!
Millie?
No! Not that- LILLIE!
“She said clearly,
Loud and clear,
Straight through my ear,
Right as I peer”
We hang out
And joke around
Playing about
And laughing quite loud
She laughs quite loud
I smile and turn
She made a joke
I laugh, crash, and burn.
But she made a joke
And I made a joke
And she made a joke..
And I-
I wake up and see a light
But it burns
It’s bright like the sun
But it hurts
And she made me better
And I helped her weather
But but but..
Oh so oh so many lots of-
Lot to say, and lots to say love
I was pulled and pulled
She pulled and pulled
I ached and ached
She..
Ached and ached
But nobody told me
Today was the day to rake
Up the leaves
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