WRITING OBSTACLE

You can feel someone watching you, but you can't see them anywhere.

Describe this feeling in less than 500 words, using vivid and visceral language to make your reader connect with the character being watched.

I See You!

I am sitting on the beach , taking in the warm summer day. I was closing my eyes feeling the breeze on my skin, when all of a sudden it felt like someone was watching me. I could feel the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. I opened my eyes because it felt like someone was right there, but there was nobody there. I then just brushed it off, thinking I was imagining things, and went back to enjoying my time on the beach. This time when I closed my eyes I had exactly the same feeling. I opened my eyes again and there wasn’t anyone around. I decided to leave the beach because I was feeling extremely freaked out. I got into my car and decided to head home. I was on the the road for about ten minutes when I got the same feeling. It almost felt like someone was in the passenger seat, but of course they weren’t. When I got home , I locked my door and I tried to go on with my day,but I could still feel someone there. I then woke up and realized I was sleeping and was having a nightmare. I took a giant sigh of relief!

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