WRITING OBSTACLE

Using personification, write a descriptive paragraph that expresses how a ballerina doll feels about living in her music box.

Personification is defined as attributing human characteristics to something nonhuman.

Forever Confined

The box is dark, its walls no more than the borders that hold me back. The air is still and suffocating, yet it is the typical ways of this confining box.

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A little girl smiles as bright as the sun. Her eyes find mine, dazed by the swirling songs beyond my home. __

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Brightness consumes. The walls are no longer, my freedom is limited yet it is simply alluring. Melodies swirl and dance in the air, just as I do. _Finally._


The world is no more than the room I sit in, yet once a day I shall be revealed. Melodies and chimes ring in my ears, my passion is freed.


I am _free_.


I twirl, loop and spin, which similarly matches my linitless thoughts. The walls that once tried to cave in are scattered and as alone as I once was.


_Click_.


Darkness swallows me whole, it’s effects chilling.


The life I once knew is gone. It felt as if darkness welcomed me with open arms. I am confined once again. The box speaks to me, it leads me on.


I am alone. Confined. For another day.


I guess I shall become freed tomorrow.

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