WRITING OBSTACLE
Choose one of your own writings, and critique it as if it were an award-winning novel or poem with outstanding reviews.
Try to shamelessly pick out positives that can be emphasised in a hyperbolic review-style summary. (Please do not review other people's work!)
Review Of Journey Of Death
It is quite a piece of work. The author clearly took her time and was very thoughtful.
She looks at death as if it not just a moment, but the epilogue to a fantastic story.
She uses mythology to highlight the stories that we here, whether they are real or not. She also had a great wonderful introduction with and heart breaking conclusion.
She leaves the readers with a warning. “So many people have already made it. Don’t be the first that doesn’t.”
The breath taking moment of a cliffhanger is what makes this poems so special.
