WRITING OBSTACLE

Your character is in an accident and has to survive in either intense heat or intense cold.

Choose which element your character will have to handle, and explore the effect this will have on their body. Try to incorporate all the senses and the impact of this climate on them.

Cold.

I was so cold. So very cold. I couldn’t see anything around me, just pitch blackness, my body was frozen. I couldn’t even open my mouth to scream for help. I remembered how I had got here, driving late at night, the skidding of tires, the brakes screaming as I spun out on the deserted road. I had hit a patch of black ice and lost control of my car. The pain I felt thought out my entire body confirmed I had survived the crash…for now. My body was far to cold to move and soon hypothermia would set in. No one knew I was out here. I had no one waiting for me at home, no one that would be concerned for me. I would die out here. The road was an empty rural lane,no houses or street lights for miles. I could no longer open my eyes, the cold promising blissful oblivion. I welcomed it. My body was no longer my own, and I grew tired of fighting the pull of death. But it didn’t come. Strange. All I wanted to do was sink under, surrender to the icy cold, but something wouldn’t let me. I tried to scream, but I couldn’t. I tried to open my eyes, move make any kind of movement but nothing worked. What was going on?! Then I heard a disembodied voice come from far away, a voice that sounded eerily familiar, but I couldn’t place it. “Any change nurse?” A second voice. “No doctor.” I screamed, but no one could hear me.
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