It’s a crystal clear connection
Heart threads tug, twist, and tangle together
Fond flirting ‘til we fall fast asleep
Our souls seek each other in a starlight slumber
At morning break I’ll be right beside you
Sunrise secret, grateful glances
Cup of coffee clutched warm in my hands
Wistfully I wait for you to wake
Fingertips tickle and trace against my skin
Dimpled darling, I’ll be forever falling
Ooo I like this one! And the title is great. It took a minute for me to find your flow, but I think that adds to the piece. Made me slow down and really think through what you were trying to convey.
“Our souls seek each other in a starlight slumber” - I really like the image you drew here!
This note is hardly important, but it regards flow. To make that ending smoother you could shift “I’ll be.” It would read, “I’ll be forever falling” which would emphasize one last time that your goal is alliteration. It’s a super tiny thought! Do with it what you will 🧚🏽♀️
