WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a complete story that takes place in a single, confined setting (e.g., an elevator).
Focus on character interactions and internal thoughts to maintain interest.
The Elephant
Sometime in late February of the new decade is when it happened. Mom always drove me to school since we moved to Brampton, which I was grateful for. Felt like I was finally experiencing some stereotypical childhood core memories. She parked in front of the school and wished me goodbye. I think she was angry at me for something but I don’t remember nor do I care. She was always angry at me for the most anal of reasons anyways. I replied the same to her and left the car forgetting my wallet inside.
I turned back to get my wallet, but I think my mom hadn’t noticed me as she started driving the car and the back right tire accidentally ran over my right foot.
“OW!” I screamed, the car coming to a halt. She comes out of the car crying, and wailing asking if I’m okay. I look into her eyeballs, her eyes panicking in fear and I laugh. I just keep laughing and laughing even when she’s confused and asks me if something is wrong with me, I laugh. I laughed so hard that I started choking slightly. Other drivers, schoolmates and teachers watched as I went into a laughing mania. My mother was confused, and I could tell she was starting to get angry but I just kept laughing. There was nothing anyone could do that would make me not laugh right now.
I don’t think I ever laughed that hard in my life and when I was done, I said I was fine and went inside, stoic.
I ended up going to get an x-ray of it after school, it was fine but even now I still get sharp pains from time to time. I was (and still am) grateful that I was wearing my black bulky UGG winter boots. I remembered that my mom had gotten mad at me when I bought them back in 2018 stating that it was a ridiculous purchase with an expensive price. They were my first big purchase from my first paycheck, and they cost me three hundred something dollars. I had purchased them from Nordstrom at Yorkdale from a nice blonde lady, who probably was trying to upcharge me to get a commission but I don’t care. I felt the boots had lived up to the price and vindicated me in the end.
Whenever I tell this story people ask me what was funny about getting my feet run over. Everything, everything about it was funny.