WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a poem about the sea that does not use the words

Deep,

Blue,

Shimmering,

Cold.

Synonyms and creativity will help you find ways to convey the enormousness and beauty of the ocean without using these common descriptors.

Short Sighted

Beneath the tumultuous froth

Through which I sailed.

As I hoisted my heavy cloth

I swear I could see the glistening scale.


Of a maiden on the prowl

In the great old, cerulean sea.

And from the frigid, icy, bowels

Did she long stare back at me.


Her face, though fair

Reflected in her piercing gaze.

An expression I’d compare

To that wondrous, prussian maze.


I watched in quiet unrest

As she dove further down.

Disappearing below the breaking crest

And I then too, pushed through the sound.

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