POEM STARTER
Write a poem with the title ‘Pride’.
Pride means a lot of different things to different people – see what poems can be inspired by this one word.
POEM STARTER
Write a poem with the title ‘Pride’.
Pride means a lot of different things to different people – see what poems can be inspired by this one word.
I love the idea behind this poem! Is pride a good or bad thing? I often wonder the same! You create this lovely image of pride as an inner flame at the beginning and I think you could take that metaphor to the next level! Keep it going! Fire can be good and full of light and warmth, but when it gets out of control it burns and eats everything in its path! I love love love imagery. In my personal opinion I think your point would be even better if you stuck to one image and built on it!