STORY STARTER
Write a short, light-hearted story about a day in the office in a world where everyone is born with wings.
What problems might this cause, and what solutions could it provide?
STORY STARTER
Write a short, light-hearted story about a day in the office in a world where everyone is born with wings.
What problems might this cause, and what solutions could it provide?
A Zephyr—a nice West Wind name!😃 I wonder if you might like to ‘tighten up’ the image in the second sentence. What do you think about something like: Her mind, adrift with the white whirls of clouds beyond the window. I’m trying to really check my first few sentences and polish them down to an essential shine.😁
Like!: “…as a hungry hatchling would to their mother.”
And now it’s becoming even more intriguing!: “Could soar between the clouds without having a dispense fee.”
Great image!: “To her left stood Sir. His floor length wings dominated his office doorway, the narrow angles of his body a black pinstripe against the monochromatic beasts.” Oh! And this too!: “…hi black eyebrows a dagger’s edge, his snow-white features stained by anger’s red brush.”
Is ‘Ica’ going to be ‘Icarus’?! How fun to be carried along by a B Rosser story!
Looooooove it!: “…and the worm in Zephyr’s stomach began to squirm…”
Again wonderful description award ✨🏆✨: “He unfurled his wax-yellow wings, the wood groaning as he took his seat.” And this too!: “Sir flapped a raging monochrome storm. Wind cracked the stagnant air. It’s exuding ferocity whipped up hair and tossed loose paper.”
Oooooooo what a sparkle of a word!: ‘omnipercipient’!
What a wonderful fly of a ride! This is the best take that I’ve read of this prompt!
And the last line pulls it all together perfectly!: “After a moment, Ica beamed, his smile as wide as the sky.”🙌🏼
Thank you for a Sunday morning delight before I go on my hike! The story will float in my mind just like the drifting clouds above!
Have a great day! ☁️☀️☁️☀️☁️!