Did I?

Did I cross the line?

With my words, did I intertwine,

A tapestry of emotions divine?

Or did my thoughts stray,

And cause your heart to sway?


Did I paint a picture,

Of love and pain, a perfect mixture?

Or did my words pierce,

And leave you feeling fierce?


Did I touch your soul,

And make your heart whole?

Or did I go too far,

And leave a scar?


Did I dance with metaphors,

And weave in similes galore?

Or did I stumble,

And make you crumble?


Did I cross the line,

And create a work of art divine?

Or did I miss the mark,

And leave you in the dark?


Did I make you think,

And leave you on the brink?

Or did I fail,

And leave a trail?


Did I cross the line,

And make this poem shine?

Or did I fall short,

And leave you wanting more?


Only you can decide,

If I crossed the line,

With this poem that I provide,

But know that my intentions were always kind.

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