VISUAL PROMPT
by Sans @ deviantart.com/Sanskarans

Write a halloween horror in less than 10 sentences.
VISUAL PROMPT
by Sans @ deviantart.com/Sanskarans
Write a halloween horror in less than 10 sentences.
This is very creative! I’ve never heard of someone putting on a horror movie for a monster.
Your grammar looks good, but genres should not be capitalized. “Horror” should be lowercase.
For the beginning and ending, maybe make there some sort of rhyme to it?
I feel like for the first half of the story there isn’t enough foreshadowing to the presence of a monster. I initially thought that “It’s never seen one” was a misspelling of “I’d never seen one”, and that this was about the narrator staying up to watch movies.
For the last paragraph, instead of “out of nowhere”, you should just say “suddenly”. It flows better because because it’s one word that communicates the rapid pace.
I really want to see where this leads! I almost hope the monster isn’t actually evil and bloodthirsty, but just scary with a dark sense of humor.