WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a short story or paragraph in passive voice only.

The passive voice places emphasis on the thing rather than the person doing the thing: e.g. “The book was read” rather than “She read the book”.

Feather

The feather drifted to the ground, slowly, it’s whiteness mirrored in the snow. There was a slight breeze in the air which ruffled it’s neat feathers as it made it’s way to it’s final resting place.The feather lay there, still, for what seemed an eternity.

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