WRITING OBSTACLE

You can feel someone watching you, but you can't see them anywhere.

Describe this feeling in less than 500 words, using vivid and visceral language to make your reader connect with the character being watched.

Eyes

There’s a prickling at the back of my neck and a sensation of spiders crawling up my spine. My heart is pounding as my eyes dart around like a hunted animal. I know you’re watching from somewhere. From the cobwebbed corners shrouded in darkness? Behind the slight crack in the door? I look, but I can’t see you anywhere.


My ears ring bright as I tear my house apart. I search the closet, the cellar, the basement. Glass breaks and miscellaneous objects crash to the floor. There’s nothing—no one—here, but that’s is impossible. I _know_ you’re here, you treacherous eye.


I claw at my hair; I can’t take it anymore. My brain itches and my forehead sweats and I can’t think of anything but you. The whole world is blurry. I can’t shake this buzzing feeling; it’s like a thousand mosquitoes swarming my face. Dear God, where in hell are you and what do you want? I’m crying, screaming, shaking. It’s terrible. I’d close my eyes, but every time I try, I only see yours—and it’s blood red iris and cracked yellow veins. Staring. Blinking.


Watching.

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