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I saw it all … how did I not realise , I said while my heart racing yet feels like it dropped through me . He fucking betrayed me an I caught him.I saw it with my own eyes. I saw it all
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I saw it all … how did I not realise , I said while my heart racing yet feels like it dropped through me . He fucking betrayed me an I caught him.I saw it with my own eyes. I saw it all
Good writing :D
I would recommend being a little more specific to make sure the reader understands what’s going on. Maybe even a little blurb like ‘the red trickled on the floor’ to give the reader something left to wonder about.
Also also make sure to check the spaces in between commas and your punctuation.
‘Being an example, this should help you!’
Overall nice idea you have here, and good luck on your writing journey :>
