WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a description of a seaside setting, focusing strongly on the sense of smell.
Not just the salty sea; what else might evoke the sense of smell here?
on the rocks
wet sand and funnel cakes
the smell of cotton candy on your breath
the taste of it upon your lips
sugar
salt
water
skin burning
a beach house in the distance
filled with people who can afford such niceties
dogs running wild
leaving prints behind
teenagers smoking pot under the dock
a wave from mary jane
and i am with you
by the rocks
wet feet
sandy skin
sugary fingers
smelling of the mint chocolate chip ice cream i have spilled on my shirt
on this beach
there is only me and you
and that smells like home
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