VISUAL PROMPT
by Michael Dziedzic @ Unsplash

Create a story around who owns this key, or what it opens.
VISUAL PROMPT
by Michael Dziedzic @ Unsplash
Create a story around who owns this key, or what it opens.
I really enjoyed the essence of this piece, JakePaul, and completely agree with your statement that children have more freedom than kings.
Like Malira said, I think the beginning is really clever where you describe what a key can represent.
I thought it was a philosophical musing and found it quite unexpected when you introduced the storyline about becoming king. Perhaps you could have laid the foundations to that right at the beginning so it felt more natural to anyone reading it.
The beginning and ending are perhaps my favorite parts. I have always been a fan of almost cryptic storytelling where the end gives away little and the beginning tells even less. I really appreciate this piece writing. Do you prefer to read and/or write poetry or stories? If you answered the latter, novels or shorter pieces?